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Advanced Graphics : Final Assignment

Given Date : December 8th, 2015

Due Date : January 5th, 2016

Status : [CLOSED] for new submission

Info : Create an opening logo for your future corporation with your initial unique mark (so I will know that is your company)

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Alinur Rohman Jagor – Hard Sablon, Inc

Score : 95

Recommended Impromevent :

• After full Hard Sablon’s logo is shown, keep it still for about 2-3 seconds so the watcher can read the full logo [FIXED]
• Thats much better now, good!

Dimas Nugroho Setyadi W.A. – EFFECTS – Creative

Score : 90

Recommended Improvement :

• Is it still TRIAL? Why TRIAL watermark shown there? Where is the full version? [FIXED]
• That’s look nice now, but still too simple, surely you can add more variation

Ratnawati – SAKURA Print & Copy

Temporary Score : 90

Recommended Improvement :

• After the full logo is done rotating, keep it still for about 2-3 seconds, so the watcher can see the full logo [FIXED]
• The previous was better, please change the BGM, add SFX such as sparkle sound or shining sound

Adib Al Muchtar – Scratch Freedom

Temporary Score : 90

Recommended Improvement :

• Add more lighting so the shadow is removed. The shadow is covered half of the logo (even the freedom letters)
• The previous was better

Mamat Aji – Tunas Company

Temporary Score : 90

Recommended Improvement :

• It’s okay but you can focus animating the logo only

https://youtu.be/OU4gbnGUqmI

Sawung Bhagas B – Sawung Company?

Temporary Score : 85

Recommended Improvement :

• Too simple, you can add more variation, especially the background

Wisnu Ardi – Wisnu Ardi Company

Temporary Score : 85

Recommended Improvement :

• Still too simple, you can add more variation

Enita Try S. – ?

Temporary Score : 85

Recommended Improvement :

• This is simple, you can add more variation, try to put them together in one line after the animation is done so your name can be read clearly

Rozi Fathurrahman – Rozi Design

Score : 100

Recommended Improvement :

• Nice work

Annisa Della – Della Cake

Score : 95

Recommended Improvement :

• Keep it still for 2-3 seconds after the rotating animation is done

Arfaliq Djaelan -?

Score : 75

Recommended Improvement :

• Is it TRIAL?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QCv_QqPN1x0

Hadid Ali S. – A1’S Entertainment

Score : 75

Recommended Improvement :

• Is it TRIAL?

Esty Istiqamah – Esty PrintShop

Score : 90

Recommended Improvement :

• Too simple but its okay

Emma Rachmaliany – Digital Agung

Score : 90

Recommended Improvement :

• Is it TRIAL at first?

Jaka Pratama – J&K Photography

Score : 90

Recommended Improvement :

• Still simple but its okay

Noviyan Aziz – Retro Style

Score : 85

Recommended Improvement :

• Too simple

Agus Dianto – ARFAA

Score : 85

Recommended Improvement :

• Too quick, it must be kept for about 2 seconds after animation is done

Suryadi Januarsyah – S Logo Animation

Score : 100

Recommended Improvement :

• Nice

Vindy Arista Y. – Vindy Arista Production

Score : 90

Recommended Improvement :

• Too simple

Moh. Adri Alfi Sidqi – AD

Score : 85

Recommended Improvement :

• Too simple

Rafika Soraya Luftiyani – Angkringan TiF

Score : 75

Recommended Improvement :

• Is it TRIAL?

Aisyiyah Intan – AiK

Score : 85

Recommended Improvement :

• Too laggy, need more smooth animation

May Hardi – 12018040

Score : 80

Recommended Improvement :

• Too simple
• What is the meaning of these number?

Dzufikar Yodhi Ardiansyah – Pratama Web

Score : 100

Recommended Improvement :

• Who is Pratama?

Abih Hasbih – Custom Distro

Score : 100

Recommended Improvement :

• Nice but it is sent too late

Irma Puspita – Star Developer

Score : 90

Recommended Improvement :

• Its better to write the name of the company under the star logo but its okay

Febria Santi – FebryD’proximate

Score : 75

Recommended Improvement :

• Is it TRIAL?

Ardian Dwi Prasetyo – 

Score : 50

Recommended Improvement :

• Link Broken

https://youtu.be/tnBNcmrd_5o

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